Group Critique

The past week I have been concentrating on exploring ideas through scale and form within my sketchbook. I have been trying to refine ideas for what I could perhaps do for my final exhibition for the Final Major Project.

For group critique we were required to present a piece of current work that we feel is most relevant and interesting.

I decided to go with a double-page spread within my sketchbook, which includes these two images.     

 

FEEDBACK

• The light in the image makes the structure seem on fire.
• Brightness could also indicate illusion of sunlight, giving the image a real sense of landscape.
• I could consider adding text to go with the work.
• Working with 2D and 3D - projecting the structure created and changing the form through drawing.
• Using light and structure as a means of drawing.
• Could consider the idea of offering a Utopia? Links back to previous work I have done.
• Explore the idea of creating temporary structures/landscapes further.